Colby rested his head on Ezra's shoulder, enjoying the feeling of Ezra's arm draped over him. "I guess." He didn't actually know who the celebrities were. Reality star something or others. Thirdly, this needs an editor. A team of editors, even. Also beta and sensitivity readers. Not gonna get too much into detail here cuz I don't care to pull quotes at this point, but the dialogue, interpersonal thoughts, and everything else didn't mesh very well. The tone/vibe/whatever you call it for a story was all over the place and I really struggled to see what the "point" was of the story, thematically speaking. It wanted to be deep and thoughtful at moments and then would do something to completely contradict it and it got jarring very fast. Characterizations were also all over the place and seemed inconsistent. Character arcs can't be propped up solely by plot twists and sudden expository dumps! Alright, since we're all here." Trevor, Colby's dad, gestured to the four other people around the table. "Let's begin the planning. Who would like to speak first?" chapter seven when colby's mum walks in on him watching gay porn and he says it's for educational purposes. He did? Oh, well I'm sorry he told you that. Terribly boring stuff. I don't do that anymore, so no need to worry about me being a drag."

Overall, I kinda loved it despite myself? I feel like Mr. Darcy because on most counts I shouldn't have even finished it, but it was just so pure and sweet and HILARIOUS. It's good to have a support group in place in high stress environments. I imagine being a surgeon is as high stress as it can get." You ready for this season, Captain?" He asked Brittany after a few minutes of silence. She smirked, nodding her head before taking small sips of water. He didn't say anything else after that, so Brittany guessed he was either satisfied by what he was seeing or he was really pissed at them for not doing better.

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There was a simple reason why. Colby was scheming a very cunning plan. A very clever cunning plan. A very conniving clever cunning plan. We haven't even decided if we're having kids yet!" Ezra regretted saying it as soon as it left his mouth. Colby's hand left his thigh.

He glanced at Colby from the corner of his eye. Colby was fiddling with his tie. Adjusting and readjusting it. He looked very smart in his suit and tie. Ezra was glad that Colby hadn't asked too many questions about why they were suddenly having a very formal dinner with his parents. Colby Williams? Colby? Oh... that Colby. Why did he say over? It wasn't as if they were using radios to speak to each other. "Hello, Colby." More money than sense, was Ezra's theory. Stavros —despite Ezra's forceful attempts to try to pay for his own food— paid for the meals for the two of them. They sat in the hospital cafeteria as other doctors and nurses bumbled around them to try and grab their own food before they got rushed off to help someone else. Ezra took a shaky breath. He'd dressed in his best shirt and best trousers, the ones he wore to formal occasions at work. He'd showered twice this morning, not because he needed to, but because he wasn't sure he'd done it right the first time. He'd styled and restyled his hair. Eventually, just asking Colby to do it for him and make the final decision. He'd shaved his face letting not a single hair escape his blade. This story is funny, silly, stupid, cute, heartwarming, angsty, sexy, beautiful, and simply iconic. I don't remember when I read this for the first time, but I was younger, and I remember loving it. It was exactly my genre of story, and likely genuinely shaped the way and the stories I write myself today.Colby was weird. Maybe he'd changed since they'd last met, but the phone call wasn't making Steven believe that.